Crawling out from under my rock…

It’s been almost a month since I last posted anything, and while there are tons of great ideas fluttering around in my head, I haven’t had the time or wherewithal to focus on any one thing lately.  This week’s news of the bombing of the Boston Marathon just put the cap on productivity for the week.

I’ve had a definite lack of overall motivation for about three and a half weeks now.  I was feeling pretty down in the dumps during the last week of March, plus was swamped with report cards, but then had an awesome vacation to Arizona and Vegas with the hubs.  Pictures and tidbits are forth coming, as soon as I finish sorting through the 1000+ pictures we took (we had too much fun with our SLR camera). Then came parent conferences, and this week I had my formal observation.  I think it went well, at least.

And last weekend, I went to my very first ever writer’s retreat!

It was hosted by one of the members of CNYRW, and it was beyond amazing and fun.  Besides writing over 6k words on the CLR, I enjoyed several delicious meals, a murder mystery dinner game, a couple goal setting/reporting sessions, and tons of belly-busting laughter.  My beautiful room, the “Daffodil Hill” room, was in the part of the house that was built in 1809.

HISTORY!!!!

And you will have to excuse me for bragging a little.  When my wonderful hostess gave us a tour of the house, she also shared with me the gun that she and her husband found in the rafters of the attic when they bought the house.  I was able to find the company stamp (William Moore & Co., which seems to have been in business from 1854-1872-ish). It was a double-barrel muzzle loading percussion shotgun, very rusted.  I tried to find a stamp that might point to a date of manufacture or a location, which would help with further searching.  However, since there was no action to open the breech, and a spot where a ramrod would have been stored, I stand by my conclusion that it was a muzzle loader and likely was manufactured around the time of the Civil War or shortly beforehand.  I suspect this solely on the (slightly over researched) knowledge that breech-loading technology first started being perfected in the years just before the Civil War, though it was mostly seen in sporting rifles, not mass produced until midway through the war. By the end of the Civil War and into the Wild West era, so often portrayed in movies, the breech-loading shotgun and rifle were commonplace and preferred.

So, anyway. Yeah. It was awesome. I got to geek out a little with the Civil War era weaponry knowledge I’ve garnered in my pursuit of historical accuracy.

Plus, you know, the writing.

I’m looking forward to attending another retreat with the wonderful CNYRW authors.  Heck, I’d love to go to any writer’s retreat again!

Writing Resolutions Check In

It feels like a really long time since I last posted, but I guess it’s only been a couple weeks.  It’s been a little crazy around here with finalizing grades and report cards and visits from family, and a slew of other things that may or may not come up in future posts.  It remains to be seen.  BUT in spite of the complete lack of sleep I’m running on – seriously, like an hour if I’m lucky and not all at once – let’s try and stay on topic today.

SMART goals

Whether in education or writing, your goals should be SMART!

At the beginning of January, I laid out eight writing related goals for myself, which I hope to accomplish in the 2013 calendar year.  Since we’re nearing the end of March, and thus the first quarter of the year, it’s worth checking int o see how those goals are coming along.

Goal #1 – Finish revisions to the HFMO Part 1, by the end of January

Status = DONE!  

Well, I do have a few people still giving me nitpicks on the proofreading side of things on Scribophile, but it’s nothing major and I can say I’m really very happy with how the revisions have turned out.

Goal #2 – Continue submitting HFMO Part 1 to agents and small pubs (ongoing)

Status = In process

I’ve submitted a total of six queries to agents and gotten three rejections so far.  The other three haven’t responded yet, and I need to sit down at some point this weekend and figure out if I need to follow up, if I’m still within their window of consideration, or if the lack of response means they’re not interested and it’s time to move down the list.  I’ve been a bit lacking in submitting, I admit. I guess I just got so caught up in working on Goal #3 that I lost track of where I am in Goal #2!

Speaking of…

Goal #3 – Finish Chick Lit Romance  first draft and distribute to critique group(s), by the end of April

Status – In Process, finish line in sight

The fact that the Central New York Romance Writers holds a monthly “book in a week” challenge has really helped the CLR along.  Usually I’m a very linear writer, but I did jump ahead a few weeks ago to work on a scene I wanted to share at critique during our March meeting.  On Sunday I finished up Chapter 12, out of about 18 or so that are planned, and while it’s very rough, I’m quite happy with the bones of it.  I feel like I’m on track to finish by the end of April, if all else goes well.

Goal #4 – Finish Historical Romance (HR) first draft and distribute to critique group(s), by the end of August

Status – Development Hell

This project hasn’t seen the light of day since the mid-October, even if I have played around with plot outlines in my head.  Originally, it was going to be a short story (or rather, a long story) of about 15k words for an Avon Impulse submission call, but I didn’t get it done in time despite my best efforts.  I’m hoping to give this the bulk of my focus over the summer, especially if I can get the CLR squared away and make myself write an extended synopsis.

Goal #5 – Revise/edit/submit at least five short fiction pieces, by the end of August

Status – In Process

I submitted a creative non-fiction piece last month but it didn’t make the cut.  To be honest, it’s a piece I probably shouldn’t have submitted, in hindsight, because there really is no good market for it.  But I have two other shorts almost prepped – one should be polished up enough for submissions within the next few weeks.  I had hoped to get two stories submitted by the end of March, but time didn’t play well with my plans (see the opening paragraph).

Goal #6 – Begin revisions to HFMO Part 2 and distribute to critique group(s), by end of October

Goal #7 – Research self-publishing options by the end of December

Goal #8 – Look into necessary steps to start up proofreading/editing services, by the end of December

Status – In Limbo

All three of these goals are on a back burner that isn’t even lit right now, though I have started mulling over them.  I’ve gotten a couple requests to continue with the HFMO, so depending on how the CLR and HR go, I might tackle the revisions to Part 2 early.  I’ve also started studying up on the proofreading/editing services that are available out there, as well as what sort of courses I might want to consider taking if I can get such a business off the ground.  And the self-publishing info is almost landing in my lap, thanks to an upsurge in news articles on the topic, as well as some information shared by fellow CNYRW member Jen Talty about the self-pubbing process these days.  I will have to pick her brain if I get closer to the self-pub decision.

So that’s where we stand at the end of March!  I wish everyone a happy and blessed Easter weekend, and if anyone is traveling, may you reach your destinations safely and return home rested and restored.

Never Too Early to Cultivate History Geeks

While I always identify myself as a primary grade teacher, many people who know me well are often saying stuff like, “You should be teaching high school history,” because I love history so much.  I’m actually certified to teach through 9th grade in social studies, which means if I ever did move to the 7th-9th grade level, I would get to teach history all the time.

But you know what? I do get to teach history all time, despite the fact that my students are 7 and 8 years old.

Now, I know what you’re probably thinking. What kind of history could possibly be taught at the 2nd grade level?  Well, on the most basic level, you would be correct in assuming that there is very little to no history (American, world, or otherwise) in the NYS second grade social studies curriculum.  I mean, the general curriculum standards look at things like community and basic map skills, and being able to identify, say, Abraham Lincoln and Martin Luther King, Jr.

You’d be surprised how many kids think MLK was a president.  Which is awesome, but often requires some lengthy explanations.

A couple years ago, my school started using a program called Studies Weekly, which is like those good old Weekly Readers you and I used as kids (which is still in existence by the way), except nothing but social studies.  The program covers everything from school responsibilities to the Constitution, to historical figures like Frederick Douglass, to how money and markets work.  You try explaining to a 2nd grader that when you use a credit card to buy stuff at Walmart, you still have to pay somebody something at some point.

Anyway, this program is, in my book, officially awesome.  Mostly because it has given me a launch point to hold dozens of in depth discussions about various topics in history.  The little magazines cover the most basic aspects of history, geography, and economics, but I don’t stop there.

Want to know why?  Because, my God, the QUESTIONS these kids ask!

They ask fantastic questions.  They ask me for books about the people, places, and historical events we learn about.  They want to see pictures – I’ve shown them everything from a video of a Civil War artillery demonstration to different photography collections on the Library of Congress website.

Want to know what’s even better? They remember and make connections between what we’ve talked about at different points in the year.  For example, because of the yearly calendar, we learn about MLK before we learn about Abraham Lincoln.  And we study them about a month apart.  (Well, this year was a little different – we did some Lincoln learning in September when the draft of the Emancipation Proclamation was in Syracuse.)  One of my students made a very astute observation. “Abraham Lincoln and Martin Luther King were kinda the same because they both thought there were laws that were unfair and they tried to change them.”

Very simple, yes, and perhaps not a particularly accurate comparison.  But remember, this came from a 7 year old.

So I must now proudly admit that, over the past three years, I have manged to turn three classes of students into little budding history geeks.  There are some topics that I have to sort of simplify – I get asked every year when we talk about Abraham Lincoln, “Why did the Civil War start?”  Then that leads into showing some maps and discussing slavery, which in turn leads to lots of little horrified gasps at the idea that people were once treated like property.  Echoes and echoes of, “But that’s not fair!” ring through all those discussions.  And there’s visual relief on their faces when they discover that slavery was made illegal, even though it took a hundred more years for all people to start getting treated equally in this country.

But even though it’s sometimes necessary to “tidy up” very complex historical issues, the fact that the kids are so interested and ask about stuff in history proves that they can and should be taught about history. I’ve never believed in dumbing down instruction in case a student doesn’t understand a word or two.  When I read a book about MLK that talks about segregation, I just pause and explain what the word means.  Fortunately, many fantastic books, and other materials, have become available in recent years that offer instruction on topics in history while still being kid friendly.  It piques their curiosity.

This week, I just wrapped up my President Biography project with my class.  Each student had to choose one president (except George Washington and Abraham Lincoln, since we learn so much about them in class) to study and write a very brief biography about.  They were so excited to choose their presidents, and during reading station time and free time, they looked through the books and information about other presidents by choice.

I can’t wait to do the women’s history project at the end of this month.

Now, I do realize that most 2nd graders are naturally curious, which is why they get just as excited about finishing all 100 addition or subtraction problems on their weekly timed test as they do when I break out the magnets or read about George Washington.  And I also realize that in just a few short years, that curiosity will be stunted by the general apathy that accompanies the onset of puberty.

But maybe, just maybe, someday I’ll stumble across a former student at a Civil War reenactment who will tell me, “Mrs. Rowan, you made me love history.”

Critique Groups/Partners Can Be Great

For many years, I essentially wrote in a vacuum.  My WIPs were top secret, to be seen by only a select few individuals – and if you dared take a glimpse without permission, you were risking death glares at the least and, at the worst, my own version of Dramatic Alan Rickman flipping tables:

Dramatic Alan Rickman

Nobody wants to be in the room when this happens.

Fortunately for me, and for my writing, I realized about three years ago that I needed to get some feedback if I was ever going to do something with my writing. At first, I figured I needed to just see how the story came across to readers – what they thought of characters, favorite parts of the story, that sort of thing.   I attempted to acquire beta readers among trusted friends, but nobody seemed able to follow through, despite their excitement about taking on that sort of project.

My husband read the MS, but only after I used puppy dog eyes and the promise of his favorite baked goods.  And to be honest, spousal feedback on your writing isn’t quite the same as getting a true critique.

It’s really worth your time, as a serious writer, to get involved in a critique group or find a critique partner.  The value of getting critiques from other writers is huge.  Not only do you have an opportunity to get honest, constructive feedback, you also have to flex your own critiquing muscles.  And that can absolutely affect your own writing process in a big way.

Writer’s Digest has a great article about what to look for when choosing a critique group, and there are similar considerations when looking for a critique partnership.  You have to find a group or partner you can trust, people who have at least an appreciation for your genre if not a more-than-working knowledge of it – let’s face it, a sci-fi writer isn’t going to have the same view of a romance novel as, say, a romance novelist.

This doesn’t mean you can only look for critique partners or groups that deal with the genre you write.  It can be helpful, especially if you’re just starting out in a genre.  But in general, a person who writes well and critiques well will be able to help you.

Critiquing and Editing

Do not fear the red pen!

Last May, I signed up for an account with Scribophile, an online writing/critiquing community, after one of my sister’s friends made the recommendation.  It was an absolute godsend, because at the time I had no connections with the CNY Romance Writers and was unaware of any in-person critique/writer’s groups in my area.  It took a couple weeks to get the hang of the site, but once I was “settled”, two really awesome things started happening.

  1. I made critique friends.  These were people whose work I sort of latched onto and followed, and they started following mine.  Between exchanging critiques and batting ideas around through private messages, I developed a core group of critique partners who knew my work and gave solid, useful feedback.
  2. My self-critique skills improved.  Because Scribophile works by requiring you to critique other people’s work before you can post your own, I had to develop a critical eye.  Now, I’ve always been pretty good at proofreading and copy editing – I had classmates in college who begged me to look over term papers.  But the funny, weird, and awesome thing was that, the more I critiqued other people’s stuff, the easier it was to find the mistakes, misunderstandings, and muddled-up gunk in my own MS. My critique partners still manage to find stuff I missed, but that goes with the territory.

That’s the other really important reason why it’s worth your time to find a critique partner or a critique group.  Even if you go through and read your MS out loud (which I do sometimes, with accents, and only if nobody else is home), you are still going to miss things. This is because, as the writer of a given WIP, our brains fill in missing words or skip over honest misspellings, because we know what’s supposed to be there.  Critique partners, when doing even the most basic task of proofreading, will catch those mistakes, which are the number one reason a MS can come across as being unprofessional and unpolished.

Now, one shouldn’t confuse critique partnerships and editing partnerships.  There are people and companies out there who offer proofreading and copy editing services.  And whether you’re planning to self-publish or go the traditional route, it’s a service worth looking into.  But critique partnerships/groups are something else.  Yes, they can catch the mistakes in mechanics and grammar, but a good critique will hone in on plot problems, inaccuracies and fact checking, characterization conflicts, and so on.  The meat of your story, if you will.

I’ve gotten a lot from my online critique relationships, but I’m also looking forward to participating in critique at my next CNYRW meeting.  I haven’t stepped up to the plate yet, because I’m new and shy and a little self-conscious.  But after participating in a round-table brainstorming session at our last meeting, I’m excited to get some feedback.

Why Acer Sucks: A Cautionary Tale

Earlier this week, I had a major technology fail.  Let me share the “short and sweet” version, with some fun animated gifs to keep this a little more lighthearted than it’s been.

 

Why Acer Sucks

A Cautionary Tale

In July, 2012, I purchased a little Acer Aspire One netbook, for the sole purpose of not having to be tied to a desktop computer when I was writing, researching, or otherwise wasting time and creative energy on the internet.  All was well.  For the most part. The wireless adapter never really worked right, but I soldiered on.

Until December, when everything started locking up, refused to restart, and required several system restores.

Sebastian is irritated

 

It seemed that a patch in one of the Windows Updates didn’t like my computer, or vice versa.  Either way, the issue seemed to be resolved.  I continued.

From January 20th through January 27th, I participated in my local RWA chapter’s January “Book In A Week”.  I had a very lofty goal to revise 20 of the 37 chapters of the HFMO Part One, plus 5000 words on my chick lit romance.  Revisions went great, the 5k new words didn’t happen so much.  Still, I was pleased with how much work I’d gotten done in a week.

Minion at work

On Monday night, as I was researching/surfing the Interwebz, my Acer Aspire One started doing these weird hiccup things and freezing up again.  I figured I probably needed to restart, but after the issues in December, I was wary of doing so.  I uploaded all my new work onto my Google Drive, and restarted.

And then nothing happened.  So I tried a hard reboot, which led to an endless Startup Repair loop that did nothing.

Chandler can't believe it either

 

My husband played around with the boot settings, but still no luck.  So he had to do an eRecovery.  There’s supposed to be a way to do so without losing all your files, but the Acer didn’t like it.  So he had to completely reinstall Windows, thus wiping my hard drive of everything.

Jack Sparrow

Fortunately, it went through its whole reinstall cycle and seemed to be working again.  The hubs thought it was most likely a software issue, rather than hardware. I proceeded to download the programs I use, like Open Office and Write Way Pro (and Chrome, because I hate Internet Explorer).

And then the wireless adapter forgot our network security key and didn’t believe me when I typed it in correctly five times.

Merida feels my frustration

Incidentally, this is the same issue I had the first month I owned the Acer Aspire One, and I wasn’t even going to bother trying to download the driver, because when I tried that in August, it said it was the incorrect driver despite being the exact same driver listed in the hardware properties.

Jon Stewart is also frustrated.

So I decided to send an inquiry to Acer’s tech support, explaining the history of fails this netbook has had since I bought it.  The response was that the wireless adapter probably needed to be replaced, and I would have to send it in to a repair depot, with the assurance I would have it returned in 7-10 days from their receipt of my netbook.

Scully says, "Yeah, right."

 

Curious about this “repair depot” situation and wondering if I couldn’t just take it to Best Buy to handle the repairs, I learned through a variety of internet reviews that:

  1. People were told by Acer that their machines arrived at the repair depot with damages not covered under the warranty (despite these people’s insistence that the damage was not present when shipped), and therefore the issue requiring the repair in the first place would not be fixed,
  2. Computers sent to a repair depot weren’t returned for upwards of eight weeks, and
  3. Computers that were returned sometimes were not the correct computers

I also read a comment by an Acer employee, who basically said what amounted to, “If you buy one of our $250 computers, you have to do so with the realization that they’re cheaply made. So don’t expect it to work for very long.”

Clint senses the bull

When my husband got home, I reported on the lack of wireless adaptability, and he promptly ordered an Edimax wireless USB adapter, which came in 2 days thanks to our Amazon Prime subscription, and so far is working not only great, but better than the Acer installed wireless adapter ever did.

Plus, all my writing was safe on Google Drive.

Emma Watson feels my relief

 

As of today, the Acer is “working”, and I just hope it can limp along for at least another 6 months, if not longer. Because, other than the wireless adapter sucking and Acer’s customer support sucking and the weird apparent software issues, it’s meeting my needs.

However, I am going to start shopping around for better quality netbooks and slimline laptops, because if this machine goes on the fritz again, I’m not giving it another chance.

Moral of the story? You get what you pay for, and I should have just bought a Dell in the first place.